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You Are...

by ~ilovekurosakitasuku

Your voice is gentle,
Like liquid sunlight,
Lifting my lips into a rare smile.

Your hands are perfect,
Like falling snowflakes,
Fluttering up the neck of your instrument.

Your words are mystifying,
Like a forest filled with fog,
Setting my imagination on fire.

I wish you had written them for me.
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Ummmmm because I love Chris Thile. :blowkiss:



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You Are (c) Punch Brothers

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Mood: Adoration ~battlebrothertherix Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, and this is beautiful!

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"Are you joking? You actually think you are going to live through this?"
"Win or lose, it is my victory."
"How foolish..."
"It is not foolish to fight for that which you believe in." I replied, before the battle began.
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!ilovekurosakitasuku Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol thanks ;P
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~battlebrothertherix Mar 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...Scarlet, emerald, violet, azure.
Colours of imagination,
Flow through white rain.

A single tear falls,
Shattering against a daimond stone,
Yet each fragment is unreal.

A note sounds from far off,
Doleful yet delighted,
I cannot grasp the meaning.

It slips from my grasp.

I shall not chase it,
the meaning is mine to own,
no dream to pursue, just life to live.


Sorry, but I felt compelled to see what I could come up with to continue this.
My mind seems to work in peculiar ways these days.

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"Are you joking? You actually think you are going to live through this?"
"Win or lose, it is my victory."
"How foolish..."
"It is not foolish to fight for that which you believe in." I replied, before the battle began.
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!ilovekurosakitasuku Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No, it's okay! I like that a lot :)
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When I get a bit dreamy about somebody, I just burst into hysterical laughter every time I look at them. I don't think I make very good poetry material.:hmm:Mind you, I do tend to end up liking the most silly of boys. :giggle: I liked this!

Mainly because it made me realise how UN-romantic I am. But also because I liked how naturally the thoughts flow. I guess it's because I think about the same things when I'm daydreaming, but less gracefully than you have phrased them!
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!ilovekurosakitasuku Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No, I bet you'd be a great writer! :aww:
Thank you ;P
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*Sofiel23 Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Featured [link]

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If you're not going to speak up, how's the world going to know you exist?
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!ilovekurosakitasuku Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icontardglompplz: thank you~! >///<
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~Katanical Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O.o LOVE

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Never Give in, Never back down, When your Life feels Lost, Fight Against All Odds

"Live your life..listen to your music way too loud, be as crazy and as "different" as you want to be and always remember you're not alone." -Andy.
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!ilovekurosakitasuku Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ :)
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